sucked me right in. the music worked. the rest was filler.

(^ if ANYone EVER tells you yor abilities mean nothing? 

(^ say thank you and wonder why it matters.

(^ things work  in spite of being  as they are.

(^ thanks for the share!

haha...eargh! Ouch!  

First...thank you for your compliments!

This is actually my first ever short (duh) so I think I was trying to do alot of thinga at once....I actually used a tripod, but wanted some camera movement a'la Tim Burton (sweeping camera gestures and the like).  Looks like I got choppy camera movement, instead. Thank-you so much for the constructive criticism.   I'll have to re-do this and post it again...I will definately keep the tie-downs, MOVEMENT and etc in mind for the next time!

well, your characters have potential and lots of well, character! ;)

but to be honest, it sucked.

here are some tips

get a tripod, or make sure your camera is stuck in place

use some tie downs on your characters

edit out the wires you use to make your bird fly

make your characters actually move, not just wiggle around the screen

i got what it was about, but it was not entirely clear, especially the ending

hope to see some future videos from you